A good brother

What a good brother looks like is being kind to your brother , doing good things, being nice,looking out for people when they need help.Be thoughtful, protect your family and friends,be good to elderly people and show courtesy, don't be disrespectful to the teachers or anyone who's around you. Show your brother how you act so that he can copy what you do. Tell your brother to stop arguing and tell yourself to stop arguing. Sit up straight, clap when people finish their acts or songs.



 What a good brother sounds like is when you  tell brother  to stop when they do bad things or say bad things, Say nice things so that can say it back showing him how to act, being thoughtful ,tell the teacher when something wrong happens. Tell a parent if there is no teachers. A good brother shows you how to be good, he knows when to growl , knows when to speak and not speak, encourages their brothers, tell your brother to do good things.

Learning this for this week

This week we have been learning about writing a narrative. When we write a narrative we use the word t.o.p.s and what that stands for is title, orientation, problem and solving. We get to write our own story but it has to connect with the picture that's on the page. We also have been learning about technology but we call it tech for short. What we do for tech is art, cooking, graphics and hard materials. But you get put into one of those four groups. When you get to year seven and eight you walk down to Tamaki college and that's where you do your tech

Hansel and Gretel

Hansel and Gretel were born in the woods.Their mother abandoned them because of the witches that were evil.The witches tried to look for them so the mother sent them off to a big troll who was their  mother’s assistant.The big green troll took them to a little cabin where they lived for the rest of their life.They didn’t even get to know their mother because their mother died before they could even meet her.

All of a sudden the witches broke into the little cabin and put a spell on the big troll so he couldn’t protect Hansel and Gretel. The witches looked under the bed, they looked in the trolls room and still couldn’t find them.But the witches herd Hansel and Gretel crying so they went into the room and kidnapped them. They were kept in the woods with the witches.

When Hansel and Gretel got to a certain age and broke out of the witches and went to look for them before they could do anything else bad. They looked in town they even looked in the sky but they still couldn’t find them. But the witches found them when they were looking through the woods. But before they even found them they packed guns and they also went training.They went after the witches but the witches were to high in the sky. So then the witches came down to them and the witches casted a spell for them to not move. But the spell only lasted for a bit and when the spell got broken Hansel and Gretel started to attack. Hansel shot one of them down and blasted her in the head. The other two got away but one of them shot Hansel so it was all up to Gretel. Gretel  picked up the magic realistic flying broom and the wand from the witch that Hansel shot down. So Gretel went after them Gretel went into the sky to look for them and then she found one in the woods but that one was hurt from the other witch who shot her down. So there was only one left so she went and she found her in the town trying to destroy it.Gretel read from the witches is spellbook and found a spell to make everything go back to normal. But it was for a price and the price was that if she makes everything go back to normal she has to sacrifice her soul. And so she did she sacrificed her soul to save her brother her mum and her dad.

The End

Maths

The deadly roller coaster

Every picture tells a story. Use your imagination and experience to narrate (tell) a story about this photo.

T	Title - What is the title of your story
O	Orientation - Sets the scene with who, what, where, when.  Captures the reader’s interest.
P	Problem - What problem or issue disrupts normal life and needs a response from the character(s).
S	Solution  - How is the problem solved or attempted to be solved.

Use the following table to plan your writing.

	T	The deadly roller coaster
	O	In 2015 there was a boy named Jack and Jill.They went to rainbows end and was riding  on the roller coaster.This one time they went on the fear fall and jack was crying all the way down because it was to high.
	P	The problem was that jack got really hurt when he went on the fear fall.
	S	The solution was that the paramedics came and took him to hospital.

The deadly roller coaster

Have you ever been on the deadly roller coaster?

In 2015 there was a boy named Jack and Jill. They went to rainbows end and was riding  on the roller coaster. This one time they went on the fear fall and jack was crying all the way down because it was to high.

The problem was that jack got really hurt when he went on the fear fall.

The solution was that the paramedics came and took him to hospital.

Reflection

Write a reflection that shares what you gained from 2015 and what you want to achieve in 2016. Use the below brainstorm to help you plan your writing.

Paragraph One: What I gained from 2015	Paragraph Two: What I want to achieve in 2016
What did I achieve? What do I still need to improve on subjects behaviour	Special trips Behaviour Mihi Learning goals Ways to get out of comfort zone Roles within the school

Start your reflection below.

Introduction-This introduction is for what I want to be at school.

Paragraph One-Last year in 2015 I gained a lot of knowledge and experience.Last year I went to Rainbows End and Parakai.I was in one of the most top maths group and I was in the second most reading group.I wanted to be at the top of the reading groups but I couldn’t because I was a new student and they already chose the groups.Last year I year I was bad when I wanted to and good most of the time.I was only bad because I was bored or because I

just didn’t like my teacher because she was mean.

Paragraph Two-This year in 2016 I want to be in the top math group by studying  and working hard. I would also want to be in the top reading group also by studying and working hard. This year I would want to go to the year 8 camp.I have already been on a flying fox and can’t wait for  different and bigger one that you get clipped on. It’s gonna be so much fun. and to the Polyfest.This year I will be good and I will listen to what I am told and I will not get into fights. I will not be smart teachers and I will not disobey them.I will try to learn the mihi and say the words properly.I will be a role model to the younger kids and I will tell them right or wrong.

Conclusion-This clearly sums up what I would want to achieve at school.

Letter to Miss Berry

Dear Miss Berry,

How are you feeling about yesterday?

To be honest I really didn’t want to come to school. I didn’t want to come to school  because I was nervous about the new year sevens, our classes and to meet our new teacher. I was really excited to meet my new teacher and my new friends.

Who do you live with at home?What memories do you have of when you were younger?

This letter is for you to know a bit more about me. I grew up in Otahuhu for 1 year and then moved to Australia for 2 years and came back to New Zealand for a new start. I was 5 years old when I came back to  NZ. I was living in Otara for about 2 years and came to G.I and lived here ever since. This one time when I was living in Australia I was playing tag with my brother on a sandy silver chair.  I was going to tag him but I accidently slipped on the sand and landed on the corner of the chair. I went to the hospital to stitch it up and after I came out of the hospital and I had Macca’s.

I use to go to Otara Public School when I was five and the funniest thing when I went there was my friend David.We use to play all around the school and play lots of fun games.There was only just over 15 people in our class and in my class there was only like 5 boys and the rest were girls.

What are your hobbies and talents?Tell me about something you are good at?

My hobbies are playing rugby league and playing touch football.I  like playing Soccer,Cricket,Tball and Tennis. I don’t know much about those sports I only know the proper rules to touch football and Rugby League.

Tell me a place where you have been that you love.What country would you like to go and visit one day.

I would like to visit America to go to New York to see all the actors on Disney XD. I am a big fan of Disney XD I watch it after and before school.My favourite show on that would have to be Lab rats.My favourite charactar in lab rats is Adam beacause he can do lots of stuff like laser eyes, super strength and more.

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