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Wednesday 17 February 2016

Hansel and Gretel


Hansel and Gretel were born in the woods.Their mother abandoned them because of the witches that were evil.The witches tried to look for them so the mother sent them off to a big troll who was their  mother’s assistant.The big green troll took them to a little cabin where they lived for the rest of their life.They didn’t even get to know their mother because their mother died before they could even meet her.


All of a sudden the witches broke into the little cabin and put a spell on the big troll so he couldn’t protect Hansel and Gretel. The witches looked under the bed, they looked in the trolls room and still couldn’t find them.But the witches herd Hansel and Gretel crying so they went into the room and kidnapped them. They were kept in the woods with the witches.

When Hansel and Gretel got to a certain age and broke out of the witches and went to look for them before they could do anything else bad. They looked in town they even looked in the sky but they still couldn’t find them. But the witches found them when they were looking through the woods. But before they even found them they packed guns and they also went training.They went after the witches but the witches were to high in the sky. So then the witches came down to them and the witches casted a spell for them to not move. But the spell only lasted for a bit and when the spell got broken Hansel and Gretel started to attack. Hansel shot one of them down and blasted her in the head. The other two got away but one of them shot Hansel so it was all up to Gretel. Gretel  picked up the magic realistic flying broom and the wand from the witch that Hansel shot down. So Gretel went after them Gretel went into the sky to look for them and then she found one in the woods but that one was hurt from the other witch who shot her down. So there was only one left so she went and she found her in the town trying to destroy it.Gretel read from the witches is spellbook and found a spell to make everything go back to normal. But it was for a price and the price was that if she makes everything go back to normal she has to sacrifice her soul. And so she did she sacrificed her soul to save her brother her mum and her dad.



The End

3 comments:

  1. I love this story Iti. I really liked how you went back through your story after you had written it and added in more detail.

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